mothballs's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[space]

Decent concept, just develop it a little more. And the hit tests are too sensitive.

[Platform And Evade]

Feels unfinished. No sound, no real graphics and the game freezes at level 4. You have the right idea, just put more time and effort into it.

[Penguin Bomber]

It's a good game, but for some reason it made me want to kill myself. From the moment I opened up this flash, I got hit with a huge depression. About 30 seconds in I got an impulse to run to my kitchen and slit my own throat because of extreme sadness and misery. My family stopped me before it was too late. Otherwise this is a good game.

[Ganmizar]

Ok, for 13 years old you have a lot of talent. Assuming you were able to put those scripts together yourself. Obviously there's not much to this game; no collecting stuff, no going different places, just simply running to the right and jumping on platforms. Adding music would have made it a whole lot better, and it's way easier to do than those scripts. You should also have used hit tests to make enemies, coins etc.

Like I said you have a lot of talent. I would suggest remaking this game and adding a lot more cool stuff to really make it worth playing. Keep at it, man.

Raikhen responds:

I can't remake the game because i lost the .fla :/ but now i am doing a game with enemies, lives, (i hope that sound), etc. Sorry for my english.

[DNA Drop]

Fun game, lot's of flaws.

First off, I love the concept. The changing of colors allows for a lot more originality than the typical drop down game without it. However, there are lots of flaws. First and foremost, the biggest flaw this game possesses is when I am moving to the side, I am unable to change color because my mouse will be off the screen. In addition, the movement feels a bit slow and hard to control. Finally, the changing of colors to get to the one you want creates a sense of luck - if you happen to change to the right color right away, you're good, but if you happen to have to take a while then you might lose a life.

I feel like this would easily be fixed with the changing of colors not being only limited to clicking, but to be able to hit the spacebar to randomly change OR to be able to hit the 1, 2, 3, or 4 keys to change to the corresponding color. In addition, there should be an option at the beginning that lets the player select whether he wants to use the keyboard or the mouse.

Great game, great concept. If you change these few things, this game would be much, much better. Keep it up man!

TheBarber responds:

Hey thanks for such a detailed response, il continue to work on this thanks for the ideas

[Bombing cars]

It's a little buggy. I'll find myself repeatedly bombing a car off an edge just for it to be stuck to the ground and not really moving. In addition, in most levels it appears that I'm forced to push the car off to the left side; the right side isn't an option.

Great idea for a game and pretty fun to play. If you can fix these two things I think it would be a lot better. Keep it up man!

[Cheese-eating Cat]

Not good. The controls are awful to the point where it's nearly impossible to control. The idea isn't too original either. I feel like this game can have a lot of potential if you did things to fix these problems.

[RED x BLUE]

Not a bad idea. I think it was a cool and original game but it was a little difficult to know what's going on a lot of the time. It got to the point where each level took a while to get used to, it was just about practicing patterns. 4 stars mainly for originality though, keep it up man.

[Judge me not!]

I thought it was ok

[Fern - Splapp no Owari V2]

Might want to disable tab

Yeah, it's a good idea, but could have been executed a lot better. The biggest flaw of this game was that all I had to do with the bosses is mash tab and enter, sometimes just locking on with tab and holding down the enter key. You should disable tab within the game so it prevents people from doing that.

Second, it felt a little dull shooting the bosses without any sound, blood, or even a target symbol as a cursor. If you added those three things, I think it would have made it a lot better.

Since this game is incomplete, I highly recommend you fix these things to make the finished version a lot better. Overall not a bad game but could use some fixing.

VioletVulpine responds:

Don't worry. I know those tricks!

Thanks and happy clock day!